Monday, December 12, 2011

A Quest for love


I yearned for love, I craved for passion.
I was glued to the mirror to look my perfect best for my mystery man!
I would act bold before every Tom, Dick and Harry, to impress him, whom I wish I knew.
One fine morning, I would walk out in a mini skirt to flaunt those perfect legs,
While a pretty floral dress adorned me on the  next.
But the desire continued, and so did the passion.
Sitting on a garden bench in my plain denims and pink top,
Crying, with puffy eyes and smudged kajal,
He sat next to me,
And love happened!

13 comments:

Inspector Saahab said...

THIS IS SO GOOD. AWWW :p

Diana said...

Very beautful.

Writing Bee said...

@Inspector: Thank you very much :)

@Diana: Thank you dear :)

Sujatha Sathya said...

very nice! esp the way it ended - smudged, puffy eyes & yet love happened

do love the miniskirt & floral dress bit too. i love the combo :)

the other side of me said...

yes yes make me feel so AWwwwwwwww...
he sat next to me
and love happened ..really cute ;)

Writing Bee said...

@Sujatha Di: Thank you so much!! Something that I came up with when I had gone to the bank with Aunty :P!!

@TOSM: Thank you love :)!!!

Confused Soul said...

oooiii I like..few words and love happened :)

Sujatha Sathya said...

bank!!!
it's good that u carry ur notepad :)
otherwise sometimes these moments of inspiration get lost by the time we reach home

Writing Bee said...

@Shreya: Hahaha thank you so much dear :)!!!

@Sujatha Di: Well my phone is my notepad :P!!

♥Sie♥ said...

weeeeee..this does happen..love comes when you least expect it writing bee and honestly in did happened to me ;)

you penned the right words ;)

Writing Bee said...

@Sie: Thank you very much :)

Mithlash said...

Thats call the mystery of life

When and How you will meet someone

God keep it surprise...Nicely written:)

Writing Bee said...

@Mithlash: Definitely he keeps it a big surprise. For some it turns out to be the best surprise. Thank you :)