Thursday, December 15, 2011

Metamorphosis



The sky was dark, and the roads felt barren
The wind blew its way, into the quiet night
The trees motioned in a rough and harsh way
The leaves escaped from their firm grip, and lay on the ground
The houses were ignorant to the chaos, owing to the locked windows
The birds flapped their wings, to a smoother blue
And then the dark blue turned a bright yellow
Embracing the trees and birds with its brightness
There was hope, there was a ray
It felt weird
It felt warm
It felt like the weather,
Experienced a metamorphosis

17 comments:

TheBluntBlogger said...

:) Ended the verse really well....

Apologies for not being around for a while, I was keeping too busy....

Cheers!

Writing Bee said...

@Chintan Di: Thank you very much :)!! And that's ok!! Do come back once your free :)

Prime Aque said...

I love reading this one my friend! You are so poetic and penned so finely! :)

tariq mian said...

I am your newest fan and joined your site today.
Your poem is impressive.

Saru Singhal said...

Profound...A lovely piece of literature...I hardly get to read such fine works...

Keep up the good work.

Writing Bee said...

@Prime Aque: Thank you so very much :)

@Tariq Mian: Welcome aboard :D!!

@Saru Di: Wow!! That coming from such a wonderful writer like you... You have made me day :)!!!

..the floodgate of feelings..:] said...

loved it <3 :)

just followed you..follow back? :)

Mirage said...

Beautiful imagery and expressions!
Another life goes on in the world outside the four walls...in the world which commands respect by its naturalistic aura.

And your description was very warm and perfect. Good work! :)

Gayatri said...

Such a wonderful post. It feels so magical when the weather suddenly transforms. Such a mood elevator!

Gayatri

Writing Bee said...

@thefloodgate of feelings: Thank you very much!! Off to your blog :)

@Mirage: Thank you very much

@Gayatri: It definitely is magical how the weather changes in a split second. One second it is cloudy, and the next second it is raining cats and dogs!! Thank you :)

Mithlash said...

nicely observed everything and nicely written. Keep writting:)

Sujatha Sathya said...

nice one. liked the way you described the change

Writing Bee said...

@Mithlash: Thank you very much. And thanks for stopping by :)

@Sujatha Di: Thank you Di :)

Red Handed said...

Metamorphosis indeed and brillliantly captured by you!!!

Writing Bee said...

@Red: Thank you love :)

Megha Sarin said...

Beautiful!

Love
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Writing Bee said...

@Megha: Thank you :)