You made me laugh when I forgot what laughter meant,
You stood by me when the world pointed fingers at me,
You understood me more than I have understood myself,
But you have changed,
I don't know why, I don't know when,
You seemed to enjoy seeing me cry,
You provide me with no love nor care,
I crave for some love from you,
I crave for some words from you,
And now it seems to be too wounded,
That they do not make any difference to me,
I love you a lot,
But if this is the only way to it,
Then so be it.
The words don't rhyme, the words don't sing. But I felt like writing it, so be it
11 comments:
:) Wow, girl. I didn't think you'd do well with poems but BY GOD you've proved me wrong!
Beautiful beyond words and very touchy. A soulful poem...:)
as long as words mean to you, who cares if they rhyme or not!
It's very well written... :)
@Dinky: Thank you so much :)!!!
@Saru Di: I was so angry I just had to vent it out somewhere, and I found no better place than my very own personal space.
@TheBluntBlogger: Thank you :)
A change of tone from last blog to this one...Quite a change.. :)
If he is yours..he will listen...to things you say and even to things you do not say .. :)
Hmmm... painful my love painful.
People change and forget to tell each other. But life moves on and you carry the burden to memories, some good some ugly.
Loved this!
@Kunal: Yes, a complete transformation I should say!! And that is a lovely way to conclude it with. Let's see if he listens!!
@Red: Thank you. And yes, painful it is!Very!
Even I do that Deepthi, my recent poem is a product of venting...:)
@saru Di: I am glad I am not the only one!! :P
Thoughtful poem.
@Vyankatesh: Thank you very much
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