Jennifer loved Jack with all her heart. She always had and will continue to till her last breath. Probably even after that. But there seems to be a gap between them. An empty barren hole, unexplained and uninvited. She cried through days and nights, hoping it would pass by. But it just grew, with things adding up. Maybe she loved him too much that she was imagining it. Maybe she was just too addicted to him that she was scared she would lose him. Or maybe not. She still loved him, and so did he. Then what happened?
He too loved her from the bottom of his heart, as he called her up one morning, and asked, "Can we meet up today in the evening?" She was longing for this one question, but maybe she loved him too much that she did not want to let go off her anger. Or maybe she just wanted him to know that she has been hurt very badly, and he owed her big time. Or maybe she was just craving for his love. But she agreed finally. They met at a hotel, both dressed in their worst. Praying for the best, and dreaming of the worst. She kept telling, or maybe reminding herself, that he loved her, no matter what. And no girl could grab him away from her. Now she knew why she had the new nightmares of being lonely.


8 comments:
Beautifully written and the thought he was digging in the eyes so he couldn't see the tears, marvelous.
Thank you so much Di :)
Isn't there a contradiction here?
He said..he loved her and she means everything to him and then leaves her in cold. May be I should not try to find reason in this...or may be..this was the contradiction you wanted to show. :)
I am glad I have created a confusion in your mind :D!!
deepthi i have the same question as kunal, it gives an impression girl over-reacted :-S
Well maybe she is, maybe she isn't. You can choose :D
Very well written, but I couldn't understand why he left her in teh lurch, and also why did she get so emotional over seeing his friends, if they were indeed his friends ???
Anyway good job, you kept me wondering till the last line...
@AAD : Thank you. I am glad I did :)!
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