Monday, March 5, 2012

Five Minutes...

Time was running away
It seemed like you were running along with it
With still few more months of physical closeness,
Your absence was already felt
We rarely spoke, seldom met
And when we did, we would end up screaming and parting ways
I felt lost, alone.
But five minutes was all it took
Five minutes of your life gave me back my life
Five minutes of your phone balance reassured me that I was loved
Five minutes made me happy

P.S: It is not the hours you spend on phone or the frequency with which you meet each other that determine how much one loves the other. It is the faith that in spite of everything, they still care and love you that matters. It is the feeling, that you have the other person during times of pain.


17 comments:

the other side of me said...

Nicely written..five minutes makes up for everything in life. Faith is very important,it holds us together when everything falls apart

Take care honey :)

Mirage said...

Thoughtful! :)

Writing Bee said...

@Aleeya: Thank you so much dear. You too take good care of yourself :)

CD!!! said...

I agree with you. Quality time instead of quantity time is what matters :)

Writing Bee said...

@Mirage, CD: Thank you :)

Viya ;) said...

I couldn't agree with you more!!! :)

Red Handed said...

CUTENESS!!!!!
5 minutes of someones time does magic :)

Diana said...

This is so true. Just five minutes can make all the difference to someone. How wonderful is to know that there are people who love and care about you, especially when we are going through troubled times.

Much love to you and God bless!

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Ruhani said...

SO true. I am going to post this on my Boyfriend's wall! :)
Following you up :)

the little princess said...

so true!! And these are the times we'll treasure forever!!

Writing Bee said...

@Vi: Thank you so much dear :)

@Red: It definitely does do magic..!!

@Diana: Aww thank you so much dear. And I do consider myself blessed to have so many people around me during times of tension.

Ruhani: That is a lot more than I would have expected. Welcome dear :)

@thelittleprincess: Completely agree :)

Saru Singhal said...

5 minutes of someone's time and of love and faith is all we want. Lovely poem...:)

Writing Bee said...

@Saru Di: Thank you so much :)

Rambling Of A Single Girl In The City said...

beautifully written yes 5 minutes sometimes make a huge difference :D

Writing Bee said...

@Single Girl: Thank you so much and welcome :)

Nia said...

Five minutes do make alot of difference when a relationship is concerned. :) Loved the way you laid the words together.

Writing Bee said...

@Nia: Thank you :)