Sunday, December 25, 2011

The Perfect Change

The dholak played their tunes, and the priest chanted the verses
As I became we, and Miss became Mrs
You turned to us, as we circled the fire
Promising each other to stay together, forever
For better or for worse, during times of joy and sick
Love had bloomed long back, around five years back
A love which I thought was perfect
But waking up in his arms, after our first night
Love took a new turn,
It seemed new, the love seemed new
There seemed to be a change
The perfect change


8 comments:

Gayatri said...

Love this post. I think in each wedding there is that one moment in which the couple realizes, this is it! Mine was after my pheras. And nothing was ever the same again :)

Writing Bee said...

@Gayathri: Thank you so much. Marriage has always been a scary thought for me. So I am sure I am going to feel the 'this is it' moment from when it is decided! And I wish you have all the happiness in your marriage :)!!!

My Never Ending Thoughts... said...

Simple yet beautiful.. :)

Writing Bee said...

@MNET: Thank you so much :)

Sujatha Sathya said...

'the prefect change' :) hmmmm that's nicely put....'change' usually has a negative connotation most often but here it is put differently

Writing Bee said...

@Sujatha Di: Exactly what I wanted :)!! Thank you

Jen..The Butterfly Effect said...

Wow! I luv this Indianised poem! Finally something desi!! :)

Wow Writing Bee ,WOW!! :)
LOVE IT! :)

Writing Bee said...

@Jen: Thank you :)